Thursday, 11 August 2016

Egg 20m sprint


WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.

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 - 20m egg  race

1 comment:

  1. What a great way to present your writing! What a clever teacher you have.
    I love that you spoke from the egg's point of view in your comic.
    When I read your writing I see you wrote "My egg’s name was Tepaia." How clever of you to know that eggs needed a possessive apostrophe.