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Wednesday, 19 October 2016

Into The Cave

One hot and warm day we went on an adventure through the cave . When we got to the other side of the cave we saw a big beanstalk so we climbed up to the very top. When we got to the top we were standing on the cloud and we saw a big castle

We went into the castle and there were big giants. Only one giant called see us but she was friendly and her name was rose when she saw us she picked me my dad and mum up and took us to her room. She asked us why did we come here and we said because we came on an adventure. So after all that she put us into a big jar. When rose got back she let us go.

then we ran away but my dad saw some gold and and a golden egg so he ran as fast as he can and he got the gold and the golden egg but the king giant woke up and started to run after us but as soon as we got to the bottom my dad threw the gold and the golden egg to us. Then he jumped down and then as so quickly he ran to get the axe and started to chop the beanstalk down

The giants well never bother us again. By the way plus our family lived happily ever after.
                                                             
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Friday, 19 August 2016

NZ Olympic Mascot

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WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: add detail to our sentences to make our writing interesting.
Topic: NZ Olympic Mascot
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell anyone in the world who reads our blogs about our NZ Olympic Mascots.
Text type: Report

I am a mascot and my name is Coby I have a big yellow beak .  I come from auckland zoo and I was born on October the 16th. I am just brown I have a NZ logo on my T-shirt. I wear some gumboots and they are just white and I am a cool kiwi .

My mission is to make people happy and joyful. I will be silly and dance funny until they laugh. I will be so silly that I will make myself laugh. I like to play sports like volleyball, basketball and rugby. I like to laugh I like to smile and I like to make some friends.

I am a lovely mascot and a friendly I like to play with my friend. I have lots of friends my favorite thing to do is to play sports. I like to go swimming I like to play on the chromebook and play lots of games. My favorite game to play is  cool math games on my chromebook.

Monday, 16 May 2016

Tui in a Tree

         
                                                                  Tui in a Tree